This is a decent song. I was really really digging that clean tone.. But the distortion tone you are using ruins the feel in my opinion. It's sounds un-eq'd and super midrangey. I'm curious as to what you are using to record. What kind of Mic and Amp? Amp Settings? or are you using a DI device with amp modeling software? or is this one of those tinny sounding Line-6 pods?
I'm giving your 3 1/2 stars for some excellent songwriting, but i docked a star for the tone that killed my groove :(